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melissa_42 ([personal profile] melissa_42) wrote2011-04-19 05:53 pm
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beta?

 Hey, anyone up for betaing 5,000 words of Gokudera-centric angst before khrfest next week?  It's got some 8059 and not so 8059 parts, too.  Uh, and character deaths.  I'd really like some feed back on the style (which is all over the place) and Gokudera's Gokudera-ness.  I feel like I made him kind of a wuss :/

So...help?  /puppy eyes
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[identity profile] rodicks.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd do it. Grammar-wise you know I'm suck but but if you want me to go through for other stuff, i'm in \o/

[identity profile] melissa-42.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
That would be great! I'm really more concerned with the style and characterization at this point (I proofread it later). Where should I send it?

[identity profile] rodicks.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Heheh okay \o/
my email is rodickparker@yahoo.com XDD

[identity profile] doomcake.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 05:30 am (UTC)(link)
aslkdfjasdf Dickies beat me to it! ;A; But if you'd like another set of eyes, definitely let me know! /o/♥

[identity profile] melissa-42.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
If the offer still stands, I'd love to have another person look over it. ^^ Just let me know where to send it!

[identity profile] doomcake.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
\o/ It does still stand! Send it on over to dreadpiraterinja [at] gmail [dot] com~ ♥
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