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 Hey guys!  I was wondering if anyone would be willing to beta a 2,500 word 8059 fic written for hanashiki's  anthology?  The rating is PG-13 for potty mouths and drunken antics.  Why do I like writing drunk people so much? orz

ETA: Also, does anyone out there have any basic medical knowledge?  For another fic, I'm trying to figure out how to write about treatment for a punctured lung that resulted from a gunshot wound.  I did a google search, and it seems like surgery to remove the bullet, a chest tube to help reinflate the lung, a ventilator until normal breathing resumes, and antibiotics, all during a short hospital stay would be used, but I seriously have no idea if this is overkill or not enough.  So, any ideas?